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Batman and Robin Forever On that first day in late June,the sun was shining bright on the dew stained grass . With the other counselor prepared to meet the children whom i had read so much about.Not knowing what to expect, a small boy with brown hair and dark eyes approached me. Andrew" he exclaimed excitedly."In group two with you."his speech was choppy and hard to understand but the look on his face made me smile.kneeling down,andrew unzipped his backpack and took out a crumpled piece of paper."for you"he said tossing the paperat me"friends forever like batman and rodin"i read out loud.flasing me a big,goofy grin,andrew stood up,kissed me on the cheek and ran off to play with the other children.batman and robin words i wont ever forget.not just because thay little andrew used them to explain how he felt but becase thay aignify all the reationships that i haveever experienced.love,commitment trust and,at times hardship all wrapped up in words or mentally challengd eight year old boy.andrew's perception of life combined with my own created bonds of friendship that will live forever in my heart.whenever i connect with someone and find their soul,i remember that warm dat in june. remember andrew and the words he spoke that explained my life. many people believed that anddrew didt really know what he was saying. the other counselorsseid he was just thinking about his favorit action figures and didt know the significance of his words. on the last day of camp,andrew came to me in tears he told me he was afraid that batman and robin werent going to see each other anymore.when i ask him if thay could still be friends,andrew dried his tears and grabbed his backpack. he took out a piece of paper and a pencil and sat down on the grass. slowly,he maneuered his pencil to form whathis mind kept repeating over and over again.handing me the paper,he look up at me eith his tear stained face."batman and robin forever"

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i love it.

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First three words and I decided that this was not a good story.

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Too many misspellings.

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it good and bad one batman and robin are forever and bad becuse they were seperating.

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its ok but the wording confused me me on the line "the sun was shining bright on dew stained grass" is like iv heard it a million times

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I'm with jessica