I need help with the punctuation and grammar in my essay?

I've been working on my punctuation and grammar, but I still need help.

Any suggestions, comments, or corrections are greatly appreciated. Anyone have an idea for a good title?

----Cherry

Symbolic of their position in time Rosie the Riveter and the Repose are two examples of art representing the opposite extremes of feminine expression. Although the objectives of their creators were as unique as their themes, a richness of contrast exists between the two works. A side by side examination illuminates three visional differences in the social, physical, and financial situation of the women portrayed in these paintings.

Both characters are comparable in the fact their types have existed throughout history. Rosie is a laborer from birth she knows what it is like to follow a plow, chop wood, or languish in a sweetshop. The artist chose the image of Rosie for this very reason as a recruitment tool for the working class woman. However, the lady in Repose was born to a life of relative ease. Her social standing is evidenced by her dress and surroundings. The fact that she chose to nap in a sitting position is further evidence of her regard for social proprieties. The differences in social standing are further reviled by the mood of refined respectability emanating from the Repose portrait compared to the raw strength of Rosie閳ユ獨 character.

Physical appearance plays a major roll in the Repose and Rosie works of art. Rosie projects an iron will and determination in her facial expression. This, alone with her clinched fist answers any questions as to her ability to get the job done. The defiant look in her eye sends a message to all that she in no submissive powder puff. Even her hair conveys the message of confidence. However, in the Repose picture the lady閳ユ獨 facial expression shows a composure and satisfaction with her inner-self. She possesses softness in her physical appearance and there is no hint of aggression in the shape of her eyes. Her hair is full and long in keeping with a day of leisure. The ambitions portrayed in the physical appearances of the two ladies when compared are diametrically opposed to each other; which leads us to our final reflection.

Money is not everything, however if you like eating, it sure comes in handy. Rosie must work or do without. Se spends her money wisely on items that are necessary to her physical needs. With Rosie money is obviously valued for survival, and not a piece of paper used simply for enjoyment. In contrast the lady of Repose has sufficient wealth to maintain her social position. To the lady of leisure money is no object, it only exists to fulfill her every whim and to reveal her status in society. The distinction between these two ladies and the way they apply and view their financial situation is totally inequitable.

Upon scrutinizing these two paintings we can safely come to a conclusion that although both women contradict each other in appearance to an outstanding degree they also reveal a difference in three other aspects in their social, physical, and financial situations. Yet Rosie the Riveter and the lady in the Repose both appear satisfied with their positions in life.

I need help with the punctuation and grammar in my essay?

Symbolic of their position in time, Rosie the Riveter and the Repose are two examples of art representing the opposite extremes of feminine expression. Although the objectives of their creators were as unique as their themes, a richness of contrast exists between the two works. A side by side examination illuminates three visional differences in the social, physical, and financial situation of the women portrayed in these paintings.

Both characters are comparable in the fact their types have existed throughout history. Rosie is a laborer from birth. She knows what it is like to follow a plow, chop wood, or languish in a sweatshop. The artist chose the image of Rosie as a recruitment tool for the working class woman. However, the lady in Repose was born to a life of relative ease. Her social standing is evidenced by her dress and surroundings. The fact that she chose to nap in a sitting position is further evidence of her regard for social proprieties. The differences in social standing are further revealed by the mood of refined respectability emanating from the Repose portrait compared to the raw strength of Rosie閳ユ獨 character.

Physical appearance plays a major roll in the Repose and Rosie works of art. Rosie projects an iron will and determination in her facial expression. This, along with her clinched fist, answers any questions as to her ability to get the job done. The defiant look in her eye sends a message to all that she is no submissive powder puff. Even her hair conveys the message of confidence. However, in the Repose picture, the lady閳ユ獨 facial expression shows a composure and satisfaction with her inner-self. She possesses softness in her physical appearance and there is no hint of aggression in the shape of her eyes. Her hair is full and long in keeping with a day of leisure. The ambitions portrayed in the physical appearances of the two ladies when compared are diametrically opposed to each other which leads us to our final reflection.

Money is not everything, however, if you like eating, it sure comes in handy. Rosie must work or do without. She spends her money wisely on items that are necessary to her physical needs. With Rosie, money is obviously valued for survival and not a piece of paper used simply for enjoyment. In contrast. the lady of Repose has sufficient wealth to maintain her social position. To the lady of leisure, money is no object. It only exists to fulfill her every whim and to reveal her status in society. The distinction between these two ladies and the way they apply and view their financial situation is totally inequitable.

Upon scrutinizing these two paintings, we can safely come to a conclusion that although both women contradict each other in appearance to an outstanding degree, they also reveal a difference in three other aspects: social, physical, and financial situations; and yet, Rosie the Riveter and the lady in the Repose both appear satisfied with their positions in life.

Your Answer

In paragraph one, I changed visional to visual.

In paragraph two, I added a period after birth and capitalized she. I changed sweetshop to sweatshop. Took out "for this very reason" (It just was too wordy and did not make sense) Changed reviled to revealed.

Paragraph 3-changed alone to along, put a comma after fist and a comma after picture and took out semi-colon before when

Paragraph 4- put a comm after however

put a comma after Rosie, a comma after contrast and leisure and put a period after object and capitalized "it"

In five, put a comma after paintings and degree

put a colon after aspects

put a semi colon after situations