This is my story-what do you think?

Well-I havent over checked it since I've written it, but I hope you enjoy it!! And I havent finished it.

Prologue

It was year 3567, when 閳ユ笧eal閳?high-tech was born.

During that day, a scientist began to invent a game. It would take place in the sky-where hundreds of kids would go, and have to survive the dangers of the wild. It included Naruto-Runescape-and much more. But the scientist made a mistake-he made it so powerful, not even himself could stop it. But he was a genius, he created a sign, it would go on a shoulder of one player. And this player would be in danger, he/she had the chance to destroy the game, but that meant they would be destroyed with it. IT would be a bulls-eye, a circle with a dot in the middle, located on the shoulder. The game would begin when the kid would enter the room-they could design their own outfit. They got to choose-camera-video camera-food-water-backpack-bedding. but only two! The teens would have to group up with others to stay alive.

HENRY GOES-

Jess poured her orange juice, she smiled at her 13-year-old younger brother. She was fifteen, and cared much for her brother. "Since mom and dad is gone for a week, we should clean the house," Jess told her brother Henry.

"Sure, that'd be great," he replied. "Want some orange juice," Jess asked. "Yes please, but add a little bit of water," Henry requested. Suddenly, Henry felt weird. "Henry! Oh my gosh, Henry!" Jess screamed. Henry was turning into small puzzle pieces. He felt dizzy, then he knocked out.

Ellie goes-

She looked at herself in the mirror. Was she attractive? Or was she wearing too much make-up? She was 12 1/2, and she curiously looked at herself. She was tall and blond, she was not skinny, but she was defiantly not fat.

She had gorgeous blue eyes, but she did not think herself as attractive. She had some black-heads, and a pimple near her ear.

She studied her outfit, it was blue with a wild vest over it. She smiled, she looked good enough. She picked up her purse, it had her camera, diary, water and some snacks in it. Again, one last time she looked at herself. What was happening to her? She was fading away in the color of blue! "Mom! Help!" Ellie shrieked. Her mom ran up, Ellie was not there.

Josh goes-

He searched on Google. His laptop was a dark blue, matching his blue eyes. He was pretty short, brown hair, and blue-green eyes. "Wanna play basketball?" his brother Jake asked.

Josh nodded, and went to the basketball court.

"Dribble," Jake directed. Josh did it perfectly.

He was athletic, and was a master at all sports. "Hey,

dude you feeling alright?" Jake suddenly asked. Josh

felt like he was going to barf.

"Your face is darkening," Jake commented. Josh fainted. "Dad! Call 911! Josh's-"

he looked back, Josh's body was gone.

CHAPTER ONE-

Henry's head hurt, he looked around. Where was he? He was lying on soft green grass, in a field. Near him was a forest, and to the left was a portal. He had seen portals many times before, of course! Suddenly, a metal round tube landed in front of him. He had to scramble out of the way for it not to land on him.

"Please enter," a voice said. It was a computer controlled room. "Please select your shirt style," a computer showed up in front of him. He chose on. He ended up wearing a camouflage green with many shades of black, and green.

"Select two items," the voice said again. He again pressed two buttons, this time it was food and water supply. "When you want food or water supply, it will show up in this case," the voice said. A bag showed up next to him.

"This will cure your hunger, but it will not come every time you want it. Only when you need it," the voice added.

"A camp sight is available two miles north, near the runescape portal."

Henry nodded, he looked north, "Can I have a compass?" he asked. "No! You chose your two items!" the computer snapped. Henry jumped back, computers with attitudes? Never heard of it.

"Let me explain the rules," the computer said.

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Ellie placed her hand behind her. She was lying next to a beach, a field not far, and a forest right next to her.

A brown building landed in front of her. She gasped. Enter now," a gruff computer voice said. She stepped inside, the air was damp and almost un-breathable. She selected her top and a skort with leggings. Her shirt and skort (skirt with shorts connected) was blue and white camouflage.

"Choose two items," it said. She chose a compass and blankets.

"Good, rules are-"

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Josh stared at the white building, "Enter." said a computer. He ran into the building, the door slammed behind him. He jumped with surprise.

"Select outfit," Josh did. He chose black camouflage. "Select outfit," Josh did. He chose black camouflage. The computer explained the live game.

"Choose two items," it added. Josh chose a map and a backpack.

"There are weapons awaiting you at your campsite," the computer turned off.

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CHAPTER TWO-

Ellie reached the campsite. There was already a tent and fire. She saw weapons near the edge. The campsite was in a field surrounded by a circle of trees. boy sat outside of a tent, he looked up. "I-uh-" Ellie stammered. "I am Henry," Henry replied. She nodded. "Did the computer assign you here?" Henry asked. Again Ellie nodded. "Do you have a name?" he asked. "You know me!" Ellie replied. "Huh?" Henry asked. "You're my brothers' best friends' girlfriends' little brother," Ellie replied. Henry worked it in his mind-her brother had a best friend-who had girlfriend, and he was the girlfriends' younger brother. "My older sisters' name is-" Henry began. "Jess, my brothers' name is Andrew, his best friends' name is Jake," Ellie explained. "Jake?" a boy came up behind Ellie.

"Uh-huh," Henry nodded. "That's my brothers' name," the boy-Josh explained. Ellie had, had a crush on these two boys since she had ever seen them!

They were already thirteen. There was a roaring sound behind them. "It's a lion," Henry exclaimed. "Don't they eat meat?" Ellie asked. "Yep," Josh nodded. The Lions' eyes met Ellie. It dived to Ellie. She grabbed a tree branch, and pulled herself up.

The lion scratched the tree. "It's a cat, it climbs," Josh reminded Ellie. "Great quick thinking though," Henry assured her.

Ellie started climbing to the top of the tree. Step, pull, step pull. Soon she was looking into the Heavens, but she looked down. She had climbed over a hundred feet, and now Josh and Henry were very small.

Ellie slipped, and fell. She grabbed a branch, her feet dangling, just above the lions' reach.

閳ユ翻ry going higher,閳?Josh suggested. 閳ユ窔 can閳ユ獩, the tree is slipper. From my guess it just rained,閳?Ellie yelled. One hand slipped. She tried to hold it again. She grabbed the thick tree branch, and pulled herself sideways.

She was on top of the branch now. 閳ユ凡eapons,閳?Josh suddenly said, 閳ユ笒ill the lion.閳?br> Henry ran over to grab a hand knife and went back to Josh.

閳ユ窊llie! Let go and fall on top of the lion, make him roll over onto his back, we閳ユ獟l stab him,閳?Josh yelled. Ellie looked down. She had climbed higher, and if she missed, she would die. Also, if Henry timed the killing wrong, Ellie would be the lions閳?lunch.

She squeezed her eyes shut, and let go. Down, down, down she fell. Farther, farther, farther. She couldn閳ユ獩 breath. She landed, she opened her eyes to see herself face to face---with the lion!

This is my story-what do you think?

That is really adventuerous. I think this is your best! I whish I could write like u!!!!

This is my story-what do you think?

ow my brain

This is my story-what do you think?

i didnt have enough patience to read the first sentence.

This is my story-what do you think?

nice story! wheres the next part?